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A very decent first animation. I loved the frame by frame work! I know how hard it is to make an aniamtion and I loved the amount of work you put into this!
Uhhhh, The title says Dese when it flys arcoss the screen and when the Assisin walks you still have the hole in the bg! to fix it select yuor object and click F8 to keep everything together.
Anyways, Nicely Done
~TraderEddy
Author's Response:
i have found out that by now :)
thanks a lot for your kind review!
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Amazing work! That was pretty sweet!
Author's Response:
THanks!
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Haha, that is sweet. The graphics (BG) where improved, the game play was improved. The arial pick up was easier.
The only thing i didn't undestand was the bars on side.
Anyways, Kick Ass Game!
~TraderEddy
Author's Response:
the bars on the side were just to make it look more arcade like... haha,
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This is a bad animation and has disgraced at lot of people. I don't mean to be offensive but if oyu died and had your face go along with this animation I think you would hate that person. Don't offend dead people, don't make overgernalizations on black people and please improve your animation skills.
~TraderEddy
P.S. I think the other people in this collab should recieve regonizition too.
Author's Response:
What the fuck are you talking about? Dead people? I think you need to reread what you write so you can see how stupid you seem before posting ;)
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It has some problems. I has a a lack of game play and th controls are a bit hard. Well, that isnt a bad thing just the targets are sort of hard to hit and this is a very primitive game. The Mad Lib was fun. Maybe switch it up a bit. Other than that keep up the work. You'll be great eventually!
~TraderEddy
Author's Response:
yeah, i agree. I submitted the game knowing that it wouldn't be front page quality or anything. but i still enjoy the engine and thought you all would get a small kick out of the survival mode (and madlib)
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First Off The Preloader is sort of glitchy. You gotta fix that.
I think the idea is great. Just the animation isn't so hot. You need to improve the graphics and maybe be a better camera. Nice Job. I would love to see another idea like this just please imporve in the filming and animation.
~TraderEddy
Author's Response:
okay
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If you give a good preview clip would do you a world of help.
Aswell as give good graphics. A choice ot hear christmas music or no or some other songs. Make it easy on the eyes and above all make sure everything works properly. If you click Orbit then click home it will still be going...
P.S. I am giving my friend this tutorial. Thanks for the help. Also state that this is AS 2.0.
Author's Response:
one piece of advice learn how to spell "piece"
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This stuff takes no skill to make. This is just a collection of your stuff is this the stuff you previously made and is on NewGrounds or new stuff? Cause if it is old stuff. DONT GIVE US CRAP.
Don't spit in Flash Animators Faces Respect Your Work and the Work of Others. But if you gives us this! What are the good points?
~Keep At it and gives us something good.
TraderEddy
Author's Response:
I...can hardly read what you're saying. Broken english and sentence fragments reign rampant throughout the entire review. Where are the periods? The capital letters?
Anyways, although these movies are old, people thought the were GOOD We're the same age, so there should be no excuse for you to be worse than me, then say a bunch of insults and have no idea what you're talking about.
don't let me get your down. enjoy the rest of daily day!
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As it was a preveiw don't have high hopes of getting it in.
I liked it i hope the series comes out soon.
Graphics- Good Work on that just fix up the hair a bit and your graphics and movie will improve much.
Style-Eh. Zombie shoot out been done but i stilll iked it.
Sound great choice of music just try to make more of a use for it.
Violence - Do i have to explain.
Interactivety- It is an animation dont expect to much here.
Humor- N/A
Overall-8 Keep it up. Good luck in the future.
Author's Response:
Thanks alot man.A very honnest review.It means alot to me,thanx:)
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Every one has to start somewhere. I know most people puts hard work into there flash. I sort of enjoyed it but i was not my style. Think music would help. Maybe a plot. Because right now it is just random. I know the stuff i make is random but please next time make it enjoyable.
Good luck in the future
~TraderEddy
Author's Response:
The lack of music is because there is no loading screen, I dont know how to make one. There was also a mallet instead of a standard mouse, but the end game button wouldnt work.
Hopefully I will be able to fix it up in the next week or so and I will upload it.
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