Score: 2

"Not A Great Game"

submission: LOZ: Target Smash

date: May 10, 2008

It has some problems. I has a a lack of game play and th controls are a bit hard. Well, that isnt a bad thing just the targets are sort of hard to hit and this is a very primitive game. The Mad Lib was fun. Maybe switch it up a bit. Other than that keep up the work. You'll be great eventually!
~TraderEddy

Score: 3

"Well..."

submission: stick invasion

date: May 10, 2008

First Off The Preloader is sort of glitchy. You gotta fix that.
I think the idea is great. Just the animation isn't so hot. You need to improve the graphics and maybe be a better camera. Nice Job. I would love to see another idea like this just please imporve in the filming and animation.
~TraderEddy

Score: 2

"3 Years!!"

submission: :Flies:

date: December 16, 2007

It was low brow humor, and it wasn't that good of a film. So, maybe you did spend 3 years on this flash but you need to be more decicated, and please don't give the Clock Crew a bad name. (It is a bit late now but you can improve their name).
~TraderEddy

Score: 3

"One Peice of Advice..."

submission: A Small Tutorial V3

date: December 16, 2007

If you give a good preview clip would do you a world of help.
Aswell as give good graphics. A choice ot hear christmas music or no or some other songs. Make it easy on the eyes and above all make sure everything works properly. If you click Orbit then click home it will still be going...
P.S. I am giving my friend this tutorial. Thanks for the help. Also state that this is AS 2.0.

Score: 0

"It seems..."

submission: Night of the Pumpkin Men

date: December 16, 2007

It seems you have a good game. But it doesn't start. Did you check the script before you submited it. You have on halloween night... and it doesn't change. Check the script you probably have stop(); and no button to countinue the game/animation.
Sorry man. Can't get in if it doesn't work.

Score: 0

"We all love your Crap"

submission: DailyDay4: Ying-yong

date: November 30, 2007

This stuff takes no skill to make. This is just a collection of your stuff is this the stuff you previously made and is on NewGrounds or new stuff? Cause if it is old stuff. DONT GIVE US CRAP.
Don't spit in Flash Animators Faces Respect Your Work and the Work of Others. But if you gives us this! What are the good points?
~Keep At it and gives us something good.
TraderEddy

Score: 3

"Now, I know..."

submission: TROLL

date: November 30, 2007

Now, I know it is you first flash but you should NEVER say it people read it an vote 0. You can contact me and i will help you out in flash. I never had a helping hand so it is yours to take. Just NG PM me.
On to the Flash...
-One large problem with flashes are the size. If you removed music it would be almost 16kb now music is a big problem and there are ways to reduce its size. As well as the sounds were horrible.
-Nice preloader.
-Graphics are a bit rough try using the line tool. But i mean a style is a style just get god at yours.
-A plot does go a long way.
- Try using a easier to read font.
-I know it is your first but you need care for it as a child. Be a good parent!
-Liked those patterns but it could have been better.
-The trains carts where badly looping.
-Nice Credits.
It wasnt good overall but i mean... It was your first.
Good Luck in the future
~TraderEddy

Score: 10

"Lol"

submission: Tidbitz

date: November 30, 2007

This was a HILARIOUS movie. It was short but sweet but it was amazing. The best was the lava and those 3 guys singing to the music. The Fetus and George wasnt that good. But Congratz all to get together.

Score: 6

"Well...."

submission: Teh-Cannon-Sticks!!1!

date: July 23, 2007

Well, next time put up a cleaner interface. Have bosses, other attacking people and such. It was ok but got real boring real fast.

Score: 8

"Nice Job."

submission: Corpse Crisis:Btown Edit

date: June 3, 2007

As it was a preveiw don't have high hopes of getting it in.
I liked it i hope the series comes out soon.
Graphics- Good Work on that just fix up the hair a bit and your graphics and movie will improve much.
Style-Eh. Zombie shoot out been done but i stilll iked it.
Sound great choice of music just try to make more of a use for it.
Violence - Do i have to explain.
Interactivety- It is an animation dont expect to much here.
Humor- N/A
Overall-8 Keep it up. Good luck in the future.